https://youtu.be/fDUe1ycX06Y
Edited by myself and Cerys Thompson, directed by Abbie Arshed and Niall Hay and filmed by myself, Abbie Arshed, Niall Hay and Cerys Thompson.
This is our first draft for our film opening.
We decided against using music as Faye walks into school as we all thought that it took away from the emotion and guilt Faye is feeling from the weekend that has just been.
We have already discovered changes that we would like to make to this. One change that we are going to make is more voice overs. We are going to introduce all of the characters with a voice over spoken by Faye. There will also be a static image whilst this voice over is occuring. We are also thinking about taking out some of the dialougue as we don't think it follows the criteria of teen angst film opening. Furthermore, we are also taking out when Faye and Charlie cross paths inside school. As well as these changes, anther one is that we would like to use a split screen with The Triple L’s on one side and Faye and Christian on the other, as they walk up to each other in the final scene.
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